Final Pieces and Portfolio

Even if you don’t have a writing assignment due, be sure to keep on your toes with 1) writing critiques for your peers’ stories and 2) improving your past assignments for portfolio.
As a reminder, here are the point breakdowns for your Portfolio Review:

English 271: Portfolio Review

Due Date: November 27, 2017

Point Breakdown:

  • Final Piece(s): 25 points (include original draft workshopped by class, and an improved draft for final submission)
  • Mimicry Poems (revised, include original drafts): 6 points
  • Dialogue Assignment (revised, include original drafts): 6 points
  • “Portrait of my Body” (revised, include original draft): 6 points
  • Essay reflecting on what you learned in class: 5 points
  • Formatting: 2 points
And here is info on your final pieces:
Final pieces 
  • minimum 750 words
  • in whichever genre you choose: creative nonfiction, fiction, or poetry. If you submit poetry, you need to submit at least 3 poems ready to workshop.
  • Format is double-spaced, include a title and author name, and make sure you have your last name and page # embedded in the header or footer
  • If you need me to make copies for everyone in the class, email files to me no later than 2 p.m. the day your piece is due
  • We will discuss pieces the following week as a whole class, workshop-style. You are also required to offer feedback to your peers as a written critique.
Written Critiques
  • In addition to making notes for peers on the page itself, you will write and print feedback
  • minimum single page, double-spaced, with your name, author’s name, and title of piece in the header
  • Bring two copies of each critique to class: one copy for the author, and one for me
  • You will be graded on the quality of feedback you give to your peers
Final Piece schedule (date indicates the day those students will turn in their final piece for critique)
  • 10/23: Jennifer and Kay
  • 10/30: Breanna, Gloria, Asia and Malik
  • 11/6: William, Eryka, Cree, Shiloh
  • 11/13: Cameron, Kai, Wyatt (your final portfolios will be due the following week to give you time to edit your final piece)

Dialogue!

The in-class assignment was to take out the photos of your cute younger selves and spend about 30 minutes writing ONLY DIALOGUE. That’s right. And I mean, not even any “, Tina said” or “Kieron saids.” This will force you to show the character of the speakers through their word choice, actions, observations, etc. So too will the plot move forward based on how they speak.
The take-home assignment is to type up that dialogue, and then fill in with other storytelling elements as you see fit.
That may be able to illustrate the whole story, or you may need to fill in with more writing to show what’s going on or tell a story. Always remember: you’re writing this for other people to read it, so try to hit that sweet spot in the informative/inspirational/entertaining Venn diagram!
Minimum 500 words, and please bring 4 copies to class next Monday.
The reading assignment is the Ray Bradbury short story “Zaharoff/Richter Mark V” short story from Quicker than the Eye.

Mimicry poems and readings

Hello hello valued creative writing students,

Assignment for next week:

  1. Read this article on mimicry poems
  2. Write, print and bring to class three of your own mimicry poems, based on the poetry that has been assigned in class. If you have a favorite poem you prefer to emulate, you may choose one, but please include a print-out of that poem with your submission. Your mimicry poems may be based on A) the first line of a poem, B) Rhyme Scheme, C) Meter, D) Language, E) Style or F) Subject. As a refresher, our poems have been:
    1. Dawes and Kinsella (I Speak From Here to There) (in email attachment)
    2. Poem About People” by Robert Pinsky
    3. “A Supermarket in California,” poem by Allan Ginsberg
    4. For You O Democracy,” a poem by Walt Whitman (and hey, thank me for not requiring “Song of Myself” — but actually, ya’ll should read that too, because it’s one hell of an energizing poem)
    5. Backwards” by Warsan Shire
    6. [watch] “For Women Who Are Difficult to Love” by Warsan Shire
    7. “Are You the New Person Drawn Toward Me?” by Walt Whitman
    8. Kitchenette Building by Gwendolyn Brooks
  3. Read and be prepared to discuss:
    1. Ordeal by Cheque (in email attachment)
    2. We Can Surely No Longer Pretend (in email attachment)
    3. Kitchenette Building by Gwendolyn Brooks
  4. Bring in a photo with yourself at least 15 years old.

Sept. 12

Assignment:
In class, we went through the following writing activity:
  1. Take 7-10 minutes to draw a figure of your own body, and labeling details — freestyle on what kind of stories can come from those details (ie, “my eyes are blue like my mother’s, and that’s the only thing we have in common,” “I got this scar from a bicycle wreck…I got this scar from a cigarette burn,” “My knees hurt today,” “I have this chronic illness that I don’t tell anyone about…” It can go anywhere!)
  2. Take another ~15 minutes of free writing based off the prior exercise. Stick to the “First Thoughts” principles laid forth by Natalie Goldberg (attached here).
  3. Share your free writing with a partner. The partner should comment on the context, concrete detail, universally understandable insight/meaning/message, and emotion (did you have fun writing this? did you cry? is it somewhere in the middle? what do you want to convey/how will you connect to the reader?)

As homework:

Brush up your free writing into an essay to be workshopped in class.
  • Minimum 500 words, no maximum.
  • Bring 4 copies of this essay to our next class
  • Also bring your free writing.
Also, I have to be out of town tomorrow, so I’m rescheduling Wednesday office hours to this Friday, 1-2 at Three Story Coffee on Dunklin Street. Come see me! I’ll buy you a coffee. Especially important if you missed class.
For next week: Watch/read/listen and be prepared to discuss the following:
Thanks, everyone! See you next Monday!

Readings & Podcasts to discuss September 11: Pieces on Identity

Image: Exquisite Corpse drawings artist Matt Ballou made with two of his daughters – Miranda and CaiQun. Graphite on paper, 11×8.5 inches, August 2017.
Please read/listen and be prepared to discuss the following creative nonfiction and journalism pieces:
Bonus! If you’re feeling ambitious, also check out this Longform podcast interview with Meghan Daum.
Potential discussion questions:
  • What was the purpose of each piece? Was it to inform, enlighten, or entertain? Did it accomplish the goal?
  • Which piece did you enjoy more? Was one more “accessible” than others?
  • Which piece(s) are more of a “story.” How can you tell a story apart from a piece of journalism? Can a piece of writing have elements of both?
  • What is the universal story (that many if not most people can relate to) underlying each of these pieces?
  • What about Daum’s essay would qualify it as a subject “unspeakable?”
  • Does Kang’s personal experience add to or detract from his articles? Does it make him more or less credible as a journalist?
  • What does Kang have to say about the way he goes about writing a piece, and how does he feel about editors?

Welcome to Eng 271 in 2017!

This is the post excerpt.

Welcome to this class. I’m excited to write with you!

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SYLLABUS

ENG 271: Introduction to Creative Writing
Classroom: MLK 210

 

Email: Tina.Casagrand@gmail.com

 

Office Hours (at Three Story Coffee on Dunklin St. or online via Google Hangouts)

Tuesday 10 a.m. to 12 p.m.

Wednesday 1 p.m.

 

General Course Description

English 271-01 is an introduction to creative writing. Under my guidance you will work together to improve as writers—partly by composing and workshopping work of your own, but also by reflecting inwardly on what it means to be a writer. Yusef Komunyakaa says, “The internal terrain must be explored before one becomes human.” This semester, through the reading of the texts and interaction with living and working writers, you will come away with a richer ability to draw from your internal well of intellect and wield it better on the page.

 

The Texts

Some reading will be required for this course. The main texts assigned are:

  • Imaginative Writing by Janet Burroway
  • PDF Creative Writing Collection (available via https://cw271.wordpress.com/, watch for updates) compiled by Tina Casagrand

 

I will also assign readings from handouts that mesh with our text and lecture conversations. I firmly believe you must read a lot to become a better writer. Be prepared to write AND read intensively in this course.

 

About Workshop

In workshop, I strive to create a welcoming environment and encourage my student writers to make the same covenant with their classmates. I expect my students to furnish considerable and considerate feedback to their peers. I am convinced a teacher of writing must attend to his or her students’ work with seriousness and diligence. I demand my students provide the quality and quantity of written reaction for their fellow students that they would expect for themselves. Every writer’s voice is different, and there is room in my workshop for every aesthetic. As an instructor and writer, I am most interested in addressing the larger implications in a workshop piece. I will always assist a student in making the composition fresh and interesting, not to belabor the small stuff such as punctuation errors or sentence mechanics. I show attention to these minor considerations in my personal comments to the student writer, and take care not to misuse valuable workshop time on them.

 

It is up to you to print your own writing and bring it to class on the days it is up for discussion. In preparation for workshop, you must read your peers’ work sensitively and carefully. When you are critiquing a piece of writing, first read it at least once at a leisurely pace without marking anything. Then read it again, making line-edits along the way. Finally, write summary comments longhand in the margins of the piece at hand and type your comments on a separate sheet, minimum one page, offering your insights as to the major issues the poet needs to address in order to improve the piece.

 

In class, the writer whose work is up for discussion will get us started by reading the poem or first paragraph aloud. Afterwards we will discuss the work, and as we do so, the writer must remain silent. When we have concluded our discussion, she or he may comment or ask questions; then I will collect the copies of the piece, complete with line-edits and summary comments. I will peruse your comments to be sure you are taking the necessary time and care with your classmates’ work. The writer will receive the completed worksheets, including my comments, at the beginning of the following class period.

 

Attendance and Participation

A workshop is a discussion class, and twenty percent of your final grade will be based on participation. I expect spirited workshop sessions—please speak up regularly, adding meaningful input. Talking only when called on is not enough. Even students who produce brilliant work but who never speak in class will be held accountable for their lack of participation.

 

Be respectful. With this group of students, I expect absolutely no behavior problems. But, just in case, I should outline the consequences of misbehavior. If you indulge in disruptive side conversations, you will be counted absent and perhaps even told to leave for the day. I do not allow students to operate laptop computers, cell phones, or other such gadgets in the classroom. Nor do I allow students to wear earphones or headsets in the classroom. If I even see your cell phone or other electronic device (for example, if you have it out in your hand or on your desk), you are automatically in violation. Upon breaking any of these rules, you will immediately be counted absent for the day, but I might not interrupt class to tell you this. If you are in a special situation that requires you to use any of the aforementioned technologies in class, talk to me in advance and I will consider your case.

 

We meet only once per week, so you are allowed only three absences in accordance with the official Lincoln University policy published in the bulletin:

 

Attendance:  The institutional attendance policy is described in the Lincoln University Undergraduate Bulletin. Students are advised that regular attendance, participation, and prompt attention to assignments are essential for success in ENG 271. Note:  Lincoln University requires faculty to submit absence reports to the Financial Aid Office. Frequent absences jeopardize not just successful course completion but continuation of financial aid. The Lincoln University policy on absences in a sixteen-week course gives consent to the instructor to administratively drop a student from the course for documented absences that exceed twice the number of times a class meets per week. In a one-day course, any absence past a third will invoke this penalty.

 

If you have to be absent, please make every effort to find out (from me or from a reliable classmate) what assignments you have missed, and make every effort to complete them by the date of your return. I strongly urge you to save your absences for occasions when you genuinely cannot make it to class. If you use up allowed absences frivolously and then have to miss for legitimate reasons, all the documentation in the world won’t save your grade.

 

Be on time for each class. Because we must have copies of our work set out when class begins, I encourage you to even come early. Tardiness will always be greatly frowned upon, but I will take singular negative notice if you arrive late on days we turn in work. If you have to be late and wish to be marked “late” rather than “absent,” please speak with me after class that day. “Absent” will be changed to “late” no more than three times.

 

Notice of ADA Compliance

Lincoln University does not discriminate on the basis of race, color, national origin, gender, age, or disability in admission or access to, or treatment or employment in, its programs and activities. Students seeking assistance regarding disabled accessibility, including persons with impaired vision or hearing, should contact the Office of Access & Ability Services Coordinator. Any person having inquiries concerning compliance with Section 504 of the Rehabilitation Act of 1973, or the Americans with Disabilities Act (ADA), is directed to contact the Office of Access & Ability Services Coordinator.

The coordinator has been designated by the university to facilitate the university’s efforts to comply with the regulations implementing Section 504 and ADA. Students may also contact the Assistant Secretary for Civil Rights, U.S. Department of Education, regarding the university’s compliance with the regulations implementing Section 504 of the Americans with Disabilities Act.

 

SERVICES FOR STUDENTS WITH DISABILITIES

Lincoln University is committed to providing equal opportunities to persons with disabilities in accordance with Section 504 of the Rehabilitation Act of 1973 and with the Americans with Disabilities Act (ADA) of 1990. Students are hereby notified that this institution does not discriminate on the basis of race, color, national origin, sex, age, or disability in admission or access to, or treatment, or employment in its programs and activities.

 

Questions that may arise in regard to the university’s compliance with Section 504 of the Rehabilitation Act and the Americans with Disabilities Act should be directed to:

 

Gretchen Woods

Coordinator of Office of Access & Ability Services,

304 Founders Hall, Lincoln University, Jefferson City, Missouri 65102-0029

Phone: (573) 681-5167

E-Mail: access&abilityservices@lincolnu.edu 

 

Students who self-identify will receive information on how to receive assistance and services coordinated through the Office of Access & Ability Services. The type of service made available is dependent upon appropriated documentation of the specific disability. Examples of such services may include the following: the provision of text on audio tape for persons with visual impairments, learning disabilities or physical impairments, enlarged print and or readers for visually impaired students, interpreters for the hearing impaired, access to recording device for taking class notes, and coordination with agencies providing services for persons with disabilities. The university also provides on-campus-housing accommodations for students with disabilities.

 

For more information on Disability Services please visit the LU Disability Services Website: http://www.lincolnu.edu/web/disability-services/

 

Plagiarism

Plagiarism is the presentation of another writer’s work as if it were one’s own. If I discover that you have tried to pass off someone else’s work as yours, you will fail this course. If you have a question about citation, please ask.

 

Grading Information

The best ways to ensure success in this class are to attend every session, turn in your work on time, and participate enthusiastically and thoughtfully. Barring an emergency such as a verifiable health issue or a death in the family, I will not accept late work. If you turn a piece in late, it will not be workshopped or discussed during class time.

 

You will be graded on the quality of your work, on the quality of your participation, and on your improvement over the course of the semester. A student whose initial work is very poor but whose final work, due to energetic participation and hard work, is moderately good can receive an A or a B. A writing workshop is no place for sloppiness. No bad attitudes, no typos, no misspellings, etc.

 

On the specified due date, each of you will submit a portfolio comprising carefully revised writing, a new piece, and a three-page reflective essay detailing how you feel you have grown as a writer throughout the semester.

 

(Note: There is no final exam in this class.)

All parts of this syllabus are subject to change.

 

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